Happy to do that. Please paste the article text (or a shareable link), and tell me:
– Keep the original headings/subheadings and quotes as-is, or may I rephrase them too?
– Should I use exactly the transitions “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.”, or just similar natural alternatives?
– Any tone preference (neutral, conversational, formal)?
What I’ll do:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive voice for rhythm.
– Rewrite sentences that start with “This” to use other openings.
– Replace “Besides that” and “Therefore” with the requested natural transitions.
– Vary paragraph openings to avoid repetition while preserving meaning and accuracy.
If you’d like a quick demo, paste one paragraph and I’ll show the revised version.