Happy to do that. Please paste the article text (or share a link), and tell me:
– Target tone and audience (formal, conversational, academic?)
– Keep length roughly the same or okay to tighten/expand?
– Preserve headings, quotes, and SEO keywords?
– US or UK English?
What I’ll deliver:
– Varied sentence length and a mix of active/passive voice
– Rewrites so sentences no longer open with “This”
– Replace “Besides that” and “Therefore” with your preferred transitions: “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.”
– Diversified paragraph openers to avoid repetition
Quick example of the approach:
– Original: “This study evaluates market trends. Besides that, it explores consumer behavior. Therefore, we recommend diversifying products. This will reduce risk.”
– Revised: “The study evaluates market trends. What’s interesting too, it explores consumer behavior. Well, here it is: we recommend diversifying products. Doing so will reduce risk.”
Once you share the text, I’ll return a clean, edited version (and, if you want, a side-by-side before/after).