Happy to help. Please paste the article text (or a link) and tell me the target tone (e.g., neutral, conversational, formal). I’ll return a revised version that:
– Varies sentence length and mixes active/passive voice
– Replaces sentences that start with “This” using alternatives (e.g., That…, Such…, It…, Doing so…, The result…, What follows…)
– Swaps “Besides that” → “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” etc.
– Swaps “Therefore” → “Well, here it is,” “As a result,” “So,” etc. (I can prioritize the exact phrases you named)
– Avoids repeating the same word at the start of consecutive paragraphs
If the article is long, you can send it in chunks, and I’ll keep style consistent.
Quick example of how I’ll revise:
– Original: “Besides that, the team increased output by 20%. Therefore, profits rose. This shows the strategy worked.”
– Revised: “What’s interesting too, the team increased output by 20%. Well, here it is: profits rose. That result shows the strategy worked.”
Options for delivery:
– Clean copy only
– Clean copy + brief change notes
– Side-by-side (original vs. revised)
Send the text when you’re ready.