I’m happy to rewrite it, but I’ll need the article text. Please paste it here.
Optional details that help:
– Audience and tone (formal, conversational, persuasive, neutral)
– Reading level target
– Any terms or brand phrasing to preserve
– How strict you want the “This” replacements to be (always change, or only when it reads better)
– Whether you want a clean rewrite or a version with changes highlighted
Once I have the text, I’ll:
– Mix short and long sentences, blend active and passive voice
– Replace sentence openings that start with “This”
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” for “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.”
– Vary paragraph openings to avoid repetition while keeping meaning intact