I can do that. Please paste the article text, and tell me:
– Desired tone (formal, neutral, conversational)
– Keep or change headings/subheads?
– Preserve quotes, stats, and links exactly?
– Any SEO keywords to retain?
– Output preference: revised text only, or with brief notes on major changes?
Note: the transitions you suggested (“Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” “Well, here it is.”) are casual. Should I use them as-is, or choose more neutral alternatives?
If you want a quick demo, paste one paragraph and I’ll show the edited version with mixed sentence lengths, varied voice, and no sentences starting with “This,” plus replacement of “Besides that” and “Therefore.”