Happy to help. Please paste the article text you want edited.
Quick clarifications so I can tailor the rewrite:
– Tone: keep it as-is, or lean more formal/conversational?
– Keep original paragraph breaks, headings, quotes, and names intact?
– Any word count, SEO keywords, or style guide (US/UK English) to preserve?
– Do you want a clean rewrite only, or a version with tracked changes/notes?
What I’ll do:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive constructions.
– Rework sentences that start with “This” so they open differently.
– Replace “Besides that” and “Therefore” with “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is,” where they fit naturally.
– Avoid repeating the same opening words across paragraphs.
Mini example of the approach:
– Original: “This study shows strong growth. Besides that, the market expanded in Asia. Therefore, investors are optimistic.”
– Revised: “The study shows strong growth. Then this: the market also expanded in Asia. Well, here it is—investors are optimistic.”