Please paste the article text you want revised.
I’ll:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive voice
– Rewrite sentences that start with “This”
– Replace “Besides that” and “Therefore” with more natural transitions like “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” or “Well, here it is”
– Vary how paragraphs begin to avoid repetition
Optional: tell me your preferred tone (formal, conversational), region (US/UK), and whether you want a clean rewrite or a version showing changes. If the article is long, you can send it in parts.