I can do that—please paste the article (or share a link/file), and I’ll return a cleanly revised version.
What I’ll change:
– Vary sentence length and mix active/passive constructions for rhythm.
– Replace sentences that start with “This” with varied openings (e.g., “Such an approach…,” “In doing so…,” “That choice…,” “It…”).
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” with your preferred transitions: “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.”
– Avoid repeating the same word at the start of consecutive paragraphs.
– Keep tone and clarity intact.
Optional preferences (tell me if you have any):
– Desired tone (formal, conversational, energetic, neutral)
– Target length (shorter, same, longer)
– Any words or phrases you definitely want to keep or avoid
Quick example of the changes you’ll see:
– Original: “This shows how the team improved performance. Therefore, results were better.”
– Revised: “That result shows how the team improved performance. Well, here it is: outcomes improved.”
Send the text whenever you’re ready.