Happy to do that. Please paste the article text, and I’ll return a revised version that:
– Mixes short and long sentences, plus active and passive voice
– Replaces sentence-openers that start with “This” using varied alternatives
– Swaps “Besides that” and “Therefore” for more natural transitions like “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is”
– Varies paragraph openings to avoid repetition
A couple of quick questions so I match your style:
– Keep the overall tone (formal/informal) the same, or are the suggested transitions okay even if they sound more conversational?
– Do you want a clean rewrite only, or also a brief note on major changes?
If you want a tiny preview of how I’ll edit, here’s an example:
– Original: This shows the strategy works. Besides that, the team expanded. Therefore, results improved.
– Revised: Evidently, the strategy works. Then this: the team expanded. Well, here it is—results improved.
Paste the article whenever you’re ready. If it’s long, you can send it in parts and I’ll process them sequentially.