Happy to help. Please paste the article (or a section of it), and tell me:
– How much change you want (light touch vs. bold rewrite)
– Target tone (formal, neutral, conversational)
– Whether to keep the length roughly the same
– Any terms/phrases that must stay
What I’ll do:
– Mix short and long sentences; blend active and passive voice where it improves flow
– Replace sentences starting with “This” using varied openings (e.g., That move…, Such an approach…, It…, The result…, In turn…)
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” with more natural transitions like “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.” (and I’ll make sure they fit the context)
– Vary paragraph openers to avoid repetition
– Keep meaning intact; clean up clarity and rhythm
Output options (tell me what you prefer):
– Clean rewrite only
– Rewrite plus a brief change log
– Side-by-side (original vs. revised) if you provide the text in chunks
Quick example of the kind of changes you’ll see:
Original:
This suggests the market is shifting. Besides that, customer trust dropped last quarter. Therefore, teams should adjust their messaging. This will prevent churn.
Revised:
The data suggests the market is shifting. What’s interesting too, customer trust dropped last quarter. Well, here it is: teams should adjust their messaging. That change should prevent churn.
Paste your article whenever you’re ready, and I’ll get started.